Friday, 31 August 2018

Is graffiti art or vandalism


this week the senior school have been doing speeches this my speech that I presented at the finals.
Is Graffiti art or vandalism
Hi I'm Lorenzo I'm am going to be presenting you with a speech about graffiti in my opinion graffiti is vandalism. then I learned graffiti can be an art.


The dictionary says graffiti is writing or drawings scribbled, scratched, or sprayed illicitly on a wall or other surface in a public place. Graffiti is vandalism because it is sometimes disturbing for example you might see one with lots of swearing and disturbing things . Graffiti is also vandalism because you are just spraying on public walls did you know that graffiti removal cost . You wouldn't like to be caught doing graffiti. Also graffiti is a mess in south auckland there is graffiti everywhere even at a kids park even just going on a peaceful bike ride basically everywhere you go there is graffiti in south auckland. I’ve  experienced lots of graffiti in south auckland like at the onehunga dog park or at the pack’n’n’save in the mangere town centre.


I think graffiti can be an art like you might ask for a big wall painted with graffiti just like at Massey high. Graffiti is an art because you might want graffiti as a logo for example a tattoo parlour. You should search up banksy he is the most famous street artist in the world he is funny and he writes secret messages in  his graffiti art. Another famous street artist is a kiwi his name is graham Hoete is a street artist from the Bay of Plenty who specialises in realistic street arts believe it or not he is kiwi.

This concludes my speech. What do you think is graffiti art or a mess or both? Whatever you think you aren't wrong because it is your opinion I think it's both. Bye hope you enjoyed my speech.

Friday, 24 August 2018

123 Tech

Our team and all about us
Mind Benders creators of dementia app!
Taylor is the leader.She is a really good leader.she came up with the ideas and the name she is arranger of all of our meetings and group activities. She is very helpful and kind. She also helps her group became the best that they can be .
This is Lorenzo. He is a secretary. A secretary writes down all the information on our blogs and he works with the seekers a lot. He is very helpful.
This is Carolyne.she is the coder if you don’t know
What a coder is... she makes the game by typing gaming codes in.she is also half seeker
Helping the secretary.




This is Amber C. She is the seeker  she helps the secretary with his writing on the blog and she gives ideas. She is also a coder at the same time as being a seeker.





Friday, 17 August 2018

Wide Reading Response



Lorenzo’s Wide Reading Response
title:Diary of a Wimpy Kid Long Haul
Author:Jeff kinney
Synopsis:
It's going to be a long drive we will be in this car for hours
it's going to be painful with two brothers we are going to Disneyland
but wait mum cancelled it we are going to our uncles house (his house is 20 hours long away)
we are going to die.


How The title connects to the story:
It’s a story of a wimpy kid talking about his life he is very wimpy I would  like to be his friend
I'm really bubbly.


My favorite character:
My favorite character is wimpy kid because he is funny and silly.


Name a relationship
A family vacation because they are a happy family going on
a vacation and it will be lots of family fun time.


Name a big theme/idea
One of the big themes in the story is mum wanted rodrek and the wimpy kid/greg to be
friends on this fun vacation.


Name 2-3 things that connected to the author and you
I connect to rodrek because I am the oldest sibling.
Also I connect to the wimpy kid because he has lots of fun
playing games.I also connected with the mum
because we both love making rules.


What language features did he use


He used alliteration simile personification and metaphors

Compare and contrast your author and another
R.L stine
He does horror for kids lots of descriptive words


They both have
Comedy in common and they both hook you in


Jeff Kinney
He does lots of dialogue pictures


Name what skills you use to help understand the text

Ree reading skimming and scanning predicting using the dictionary and making connections and I read like a writer.


Friday, 10 August 2018

The Angry Bird By Lorenzo Graydon


In our class we have been doing some free writing and this is a story with lots of descriptive language for example there was an owl angry bird with a beak as sharp as a knife claws that could crack a walnut and eyes that could see as far as he wanted to he was a savage he was never happy

The Angry Bird By Lorenzo Graydon


It was a fabulous day with a fabulous town but there was one thing that made the town destroyed it was a owl angry bird with a beak as sharp as a knife claws that could crack a walnut and eyes that could see as far as he wanted to he was a savage he was never happy this was the town before it had fun happiness everyone was playing and the houses were clean but now no one is happy no one has fun all the buildings are broken but one day the bird went happy then he fixed everything and they all had fun.

Until one day he got kicked out of town and he flew back but he was angry. He beat up everyone and broke the buildings then he had to go to bird jail but he escaped and fixed everything and he was really happy he apologised he fixed buildings he started to baby bird sit and take care of egg and they lived happily ever after.  


Image result for angry birds real owl
This is photo of before
Image result for happy bird owl
and now

Friday, 3 August 2018

Science day

Thursday 2nd August 2018


Dear Shanahon,


Thank You for coming to our class and showing us all about pH in science.


I especially loved the pH testing because it was cool with all the colors and the taste testing because there were yum stuff.


One thing I learnt was the pH scale and that body wash was a base/alkali and our skin is acid.


One thing I found challenging was the taste testing because there was yucky stuff for example body wash and apple cider vinegar.


We are really excited to have you in our class every week we can't wait at all.

Sincerely Lorenzo This Letter was about Kierans mum coming to school and teaching us some science it was fun.