In our class we have been doing some free writing and this is a story with lots of descriptive language for example there was an owl angry bird with a beak as sharp as a knife claws that could crack a walnut and eyes that could see as far as he wanted to he was a savage he was never happy
The Angry Bird By Lorenzo Graydon
It was a fabulous day with a fabulous town but there was one thing that made the town destroyed it was a owl angry bird with a beak as sharp as a knife claws that could crack a walnut and eyes that could see as far as he wanted to he was a savage he was never happy this was the town before it had fun happiness everyone was playing and the houses were clean but now no one is happy no one has fun all the buildings are broken but one day the bird went happy then he fixed everything and they all had fun.
Until one day he got kicked out of town and he flew back but he was angry. He beat up everyone and broke the buildings then he had to go to bird jail but he escaped and fixed everything and he was really happy he apologised he fixed buildings he started to baby bird sit and take care of egg and they lived happily ever after.
This is photo of before
and now
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